Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is better to be a member of a group than to be the leader of a group. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Leadership is a vital role in a community or a group. It is considered as the most respectable position in the society. In some circumstances, it is fair to be an active participant than to lead the team but in other situations, it is vice versa. In my perspective, I assert that both being a leader and a member of a group is equally valuable in certain environments.
On one side of the argument, I state that leadership is the best quality that is highly beneficial to direct people in the right direction. Moreover, I feel that it is an art of coming forward and taking responsibility to favour the people and guide them for the benefit of the group. I would like to mention the example of the first minister of Scotland Mrs. Nicola Sturgeon. When she was the member of Scottish parliament, the Scottish government failed to pass the Scottish Independence referendum, then she took over the leadership of the government as the first minister and now strengthened the independence referendum into a stronger possible one in the near future.
Nevertheless, on other side of the argument, I feel that being an ordinary member of a team could enable to actively contribute to the group. In addition, the individual member could feel lesser pressure and burden, and, hence it enhances them to work effectively and efficiently. Therefore, they could provide game challenging opinions to the group leader, thus the whole group could benefit out of it. For instance, Mr. Sundar Pitchai, CEO of Google Incorporation, initially worked as an ordinary employee and helped Google Inc. to lead the technology among other leading firms. Today that organisation has honoured him by making him to lead Google Inc.
In conclusion, after coxing and boxing of the issue, positions of the member as well as the leader of the group are well balanced in different scenarios. Therefore, in my opinion, whatever the position in which we contribute to the group, it is highly valuable and respectable in a group.
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Hiya, Thank you for your
Hiya,
Thank you for your comment!
You just mentioned flaws is I have only 172 different words out of 200. So, my question is if I write 200 different words, will I get more than 6.5 band?
Please provide some suggestions and criteria to improve to 7+ band based on this essay.
Thank you very much indeed!
Yes, you get higher marks to
Yes, you get higher marks to have more different words. the ideal condition:
No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Also better to give your clear answer in the introduction, for example: I like to be a leader. and then try this pattern in 5 paragraphs:
paragraph 1: introduction. Your ideas/opinions here: I like to be a leader.
paragraph 2: Admittedly, there are some advantages of being a group member. First, ... Second, ...
paragraph 3: However, still I like to be a leader. reason 1 + why reason 1 + example for reason 1 + a small conclusion for reason 1.
paragraph 4: reason 2 + why reason 2 + example for reason 2+ a small conclusion for reason 2.
paragraph 5: conclusion: I like to be a leader.
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More content wanted if you want 7.0 or over. Try to put around 350 words. Read a real story by a testbig user why more content:
http://www.testbig.com/ielts-essays/some-people-prefer-spend-their-live…
flaws:
No. of Different Words: 172 200
Don't do this:
I assert that
I state that
I feel that
I would like to mention
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 6.5 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 15 15
No. of Words: 338 350
No. of Characters: 1614 1500
No. of Different Words: 172 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.288 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.775 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.866 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 114 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 81 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 68 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 40 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 22.533 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.302 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.667 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.338 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.544 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.137 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5