Research indicates that the characterlistics we are born with have much more influence on our personality and development than any experiences we may have in our life. which do you consider to be the major influence?
People have always been curious about which is the major impact on their personality and development, the inherent characteristics or their later experiences in lives. A research reveals that the characteristics people are born with exert much more influence on them than any experiences they have in their lives. From my part, I would like to believe that inborn characteristics play a larger role.
To begin with, it should be noted that inherent characteristics determine what relationship you will have with your friends or families in your life to a large extent. It is common knowledge that ...
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partly because his or her family suffer a great financial crisis
partly because his or her family suffers a great financial crisis
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