these days researchers wants to know about the major influence on our personality. According to the studies , our character has more influence on our personality rather than our self experience. In this essay I am going to write about which one is more important and has a strong effect on our personality.
First, personality is consist of genetic and experiments.
genetic is gens which are coming from parents both mother and father, which has a important informations.
The second is our experience in our life , any achivement ,
fails and succses. characteristic is coming from gens we are born with, some people have a same character as their parents or other relatives like grand dad or grand mother.
It is clear that our experience has major role on our personality , many rich people do not coming from rich family.
in their experience they have been faced with many dificulties and fails , they had to fight with these obstacles and face with them, all these problems makes these people more strong as in their personality. an other example could be , people can learn and all of these knowledge makes different personality in different people.
in conclusion, I believe that both character and self experience in life can influnce on our personality but i strongly believe that any real life experience has more impact on our personality and this can be a reason why people character and personality could be change during their life.
- Research indicates that the characterlistics we are born with have much more influence on our personality and development than any experiences we may have in our life. which do you consider to be the major influence? 56
- Research indicates that the characterlistics we are born with have much more influence on our personality and development than any experiences we may have in our life. which do you consider to be the major influence? 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, so, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1219.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 241.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05809128631 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82522061566 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 176.041082164 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.497925311203 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 383.4 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.1999320012 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.818181818 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9090909091 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.72727272727 7.06120827912 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.38176352705 183% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.378752423361 0.244688304435 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.141262946973 0.084324248473 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0805355064337 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157339900767 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0899864147736 0.056905535591 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.04 8.58950901804 82% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 78.4519038076 46% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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