In some countries younger people have a little leisure time and are under a lot of pressure to work hard on their studies. What do you think are the causes of this? What is solution see you can suggest?
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- The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 60
- In some countries younger people have a little leisure time and are under a lot of pressure to work hard on their studies. What do you think are the causes of this? What is solution see you can suggest? 60
- Some people say that advertisement encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about a new products and may improve our lives. Which your viewpoint do you agree with. Give reasons for your answer and inc 50
are you hold of you later before giving priority to any idea weekend for Jalavihar this.
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They do not have to worry too much is that they can not a full course on a mission hall and feels on their studylast but not least university and and colleges have to reduce the work given to buy them to the students.
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is to finding a more appreciative view.
is to find a more appreciative view.
Finally I want to concluddad student to have to enjoy a lot
Finally I want to conclude that students have to enjoy a lot
Sentence: Primer facing, in some countries in university and colleges are where is the director what is the student daughter there are restrictions on related to study in evitabledaughter moving ahead I deemed younger people who belongs to poor family have a next to you to change their present situation so there a focus on their study ceaselessly Praveen further, some students want to fulfil the expectations of their parents.
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Sentence: They do not have to worry too much is that they can not a full course on a mission hall and feels on their studylast but not least university and and colleges have to reduce the work given to buy them to the students.
Error: studylast Suggestion: study last
Sentence: Finally I want to concluddad student to have to enjoy a lot to get rid of tiredness and they don't have to only focus on their study if they do not maintain their health they will suffer
Error: concluddad Suggestion: concluded
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in some countries in university and colleges are where is the director what is the student daughter there are restrictions on related to study in evitabledaughter moving ahead I deemed younger people who belongs to poor family have a next to you to change their present situation so there a focus on their study ceaselessly Praveen further
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