Some people believe that countries should invite foreign companies to open their brunches, offices and factories in order to develop their economies. Others think countries should invest in their own companies instead. Discuss both views and give your own opinion
Some people believe that countries should invite foreign companies to open their brunches, offices and factories in order to develop their economies. Others think countries should invest in their own companies instead. Discuss both views and give your own opinion
Some people believe that countries should invite foreign companies to open their brunches, offices and factories in order to develop their economies. Others think countries should invest in their own companies instead. Discuss both views and give your own opinionSome people believe that countries should invite foreign companies to open their brunches, offices and factories in order to develop their economies. Others think countries should invest in their own companies instead. Discuss both views and give your own opinionSome people believe that countries should invite foreign companies to open their brunches, offices and factories in order to develop their economies. Others think countries should invest in their own companies instead. Discuss both views and give your own opinion
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- In the past people used to wear their traditional clothes depending on their culture. Nowadays the trend is changing and people wear different clothes. Is it a positive or negative development? How does it affect certain societies and people’s behavior? 85
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take decisions that contradicts the local development plans
take decisions that contradict the local development plans
the authorities had to demolish hundreds of houses and thousands of farming lands were lost.
the authorities had to demolish hundreds of houses, and thousands of farming lands were lost.
they likely advantages should not be overlooked.
their likely advantages should not be overlooked.
Sentence: As a result, their policies can, in no way, guranteed to be in the country best interest.
Description: A noun, singular, common is not usually followed by an adjective, superlative
Suggestion: Refer to country and best
Sentence: As a result, their policies can, in no way, guranteed to be in the country best interest.
Error: guranteed Suggestion: guaranteed
Sentence: To illustrate, the infrastructure would be extremly enhanced, new employment potentials would be created and the hard currency would be readily abundant.
Error: extremly Suggestion: extremely
flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 7.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 2 2
No. of Sentences: 17 15
No. of Words: 300 350
No. of Characters: 1621 1500
No. of Different Words: 193 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.162 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.403 4.6
Word Length SD: 3.068 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 120 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 96 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 78 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 50 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 17.647 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.361 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.529 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.265 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.517 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.017 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5