Some people say that noise made by people
should be strictly controlled while others say
they should be free to make noise without
limitation. Discuss both views and give your
own opinion.
Lifestyle has undergone dramatic changes over couple of decades. Presently, some people are of the opinion that it is necessary to control the noise pollution to uplift the quality of life. However, opponents have conflicting arguments.
There are manifold points to support former view. First and foremost, people are fond of playing music in a very loud sound on disk jockey (DJ) to have fun and frolic on festive occasions. As a result, people especially employees have to face enormous disturbance who work near by at the work places. Consequently, noise pollution has been a serious concern w...
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Comments
what could be done more to
what could be done more to get 8.0 except avoiding repeated phrases ????
Some attributes are not in
Some attributes are not in the favor of essayE-rater:
Avg. Sentence Length: 13.478 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.14 7.5
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.038 0.07
"Sentence Length SD is low" means that the essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length.
However, this is related to your writing style, not for the language. So you don't really need to care too much about the attributes and rates.
noise is the symbol of enjoyment
flaws:
Try not repeat words, phrases and sentences like:
by shouting, hooting, crying...
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 7.5 out of 9
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 23 15
No. of Words: 310 350
No. of Characters: 1617 1500
No. of Different Words: 191 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.196 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.216 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.738 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 121 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 87 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 61 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 47 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 13.478 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.14 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.609 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.287 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.507 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.038 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5