Some people think that spending a lot on birthday celebrations and wedding is a waste of money.But others think that it is important to young people and the society.Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Celebrations add charm to the beauty of life. Presently, in this dazzling world, people are fond of spending lavishly on festive occasions to represent their status especially. Some people assert that incredible expense over such events is a waste of money. However, others have conflicting views. Here, I would like to account for both sides with my perception.
There are manifold points to shore up the former view. First and foremost, inflation has got on nerves of people in this materialistic world. Therefore, people especially middle or low class have to toil hard for two square meals ...
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Sentence: Moreover, parents, nowadays, are passionate to make their children very special by organising grand events on birthdays or marriages and bestow marvellous gifts.
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