In this contemporary era, people spend huge amount of money on celebrations. A section of society believes that investing enormous amount of money on wedding ceremonies, birthday functions and other public celebrations is nothing but squandering of money. Whereas, others opine that these are beneficial for people and society. An attempt is made here to discuss both the views along with my opinion in the subsequent paragraphs.
To begin with, nowadays, people are more interested in luxurious and lavish celebrations as these celebrations upgrade the status of people in the society. In other words, If a family invest huge amount of money on any function or party, it would naturally gain the attention of public. Moreover, the respect from the society also grow. People from affluent families give more importance to materialistic pleasures and spend enormous amount of money to make a function more conspicuous. To give a clear example, a north Indian family spend around 20 million rupees for the marriage ceremony of her daughter to make it noticeable. Therefore, the authorities should implement stringent measures to regulate and minimize such acts.
On the other hand, there are opinion from one section that the amount of money spend on such occasions benefits certain individuals. To illustrate, parents provide dowry to their daughter to ensure safety of their children in another house. A socioeconomic survey conducted by India Today in 2017 reported that 6 out of 10 women face torturing and harassment in their husband's home due to less dowry. Apart from that, there are certain celebrations which are beneficial to the society. To exemplify, Independence day which is officially celebrated in August 15 at New Delhi gives message to the public about freedom and the sufferings faced by historic legends. Even though, such celebrations consume large amount of money, it would help the future generation who get detached from the historical and cultural roots to realize the significance of such events.
To recapitulate, celebrations play an inevitable role in our life. Even though, people squander their money on grant celebrations, the benefits it bring to the society is irrefutable. After analysing both the arguments, I came to the conclusion that it would be better if the government put some restriction on the bulk and limitless amount of money spend on luxurious functions. Setting a particular budget by the government can minimize the occurrence of such events in the coming years.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, therefore, whereas, apart from, in other words, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 67.0 41.998997996 160% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2114.0 1615.20841683 131% => OK
No of words: 401.0 315.596192385 127% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27182044888 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47492842339 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93255169666 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 176.041082164 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558603491272 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 675.9 506.74238477 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.8631543403 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.7 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.05 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.45 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275151170356 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0769989293261 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0621460717443 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175295860373 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.080708299008 0.056905535591 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 78.4519038076 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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