Topic: We are becoming increasingly dependent on computers. They are used in business, hospitals, crime detection and even to fly planes.
What things will they be used for in the future? Is this dependent on computers a good thing or should we be more suspicious of their benefits.
Nowadays, computers are playing extensive role in our daily life’s working such as business documentation, crime detection, moreover fly planes. Although, computers made our life easy but it has tendency to get easily effected by viruses which may cause of major damage. In my opinion, we should adopt computer technology with care.
First of all, computers are helping us to save our time and it is also help us to maintain environment green due its ability of paperless working. For instance, to apply for any government job was lengthy process, now it is matter of one click. We have just simply log on to the concerned department’s site & submit the application. By this, we can save both time & paper. Moreover, tracking application status is become very easy. Secondly, with the help of computer, we can easily record & retrieve the data.
Although, use of computers have lot of benefits but these are very vulnerable of virus attack too. For example, banking account, email account hacking, personal & financial information hacking are name of few.
However, it is very much possible that computers will more involve in our daily life. Driving car without driver may help to blind people for commuting. Scientist also may predict accurately about natural disaster.
All in all, being updated and adopt computer technology is necessity of today’s life, if we will use computers with little awareness, it can be more beneficial for us.
playing extensive role in our daily life’s working such as business documentation
playing extensive role in our daily lives such as business documentation
and it is also help us to
and it also helps us to
to apply for any government job was lengthy process,
applying any government jobs was a lengthy process,
tracking application status is become very easy.
tracking application status is becoming very easy.
tracking application status becomes very easy.
use of computers have lot of benefits
use of computers has lot of benefits
will more involve in our daily life
will involve more in our daily life
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