Topic: We are becoming increasingly dependent on computers. They are used in business, hospitals, crime detection and even to fly planes.
What things will they be used for in the future? Is this dependent on computers a good thing or should we be more suspicious of their benefits.
In today's world, computer are inevitable part even without computers every day actives are no possible. computers are used in many places like hospitals and companies and in future computers used for othe purposes and more use of computer have negative effects too that are discuss in the upcoming paragraphs.
There are a plethora of computer uses in future and predominant one is for house work.computers will be use in house for home activities like cleaning and cooking as robert . Moreover, compter is use at home for office work so people can work from their house instead to go office.beside this, computers also will change teaching pattern because teachers will use computers in their class room with this tool they also can teach other students on different places. so teacher will use computers for study purposes. Furthermore, computer also used for storage of data and in future on every place people will use it as storage device to save data.
Shifting towards its negative effects, and first effect is it leads to unemployment because people spend more time on computers also they give more preference to work from home so that leads to unemployment. In addition to this, it also leads to lack of discipline among pupils because students can not interact with teacher so they can not learn about importance of discipline and they are also lack in moral values.
To recapitulate, computers are very useful in many filed but it has also had impact on people health as well as on their personal life.i suggest that people use computer in limited place.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 105, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Computers
...ters every day actives are no possible. computers are used in many places like hospitals ...
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Line 1, column 275, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'discussed'.
Suggestion: discussed
...uter have negative effects too that are discuss in the upcoming paragraphs. There a...
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Line 3, column 173, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ties like cleaning and cooking as robert . Moreover, compter is use at home for of...
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Line 3, column 466, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...ach other students on different places. so teacher will use computers for study pu...
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Line 5, column 419, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...and they are also lack in moral values. To recapitulate, computers are very usef...
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Line 7, column 136, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ealth as well as on their personal life.i suggest that people use computer in lim...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, well, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1310.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96212121212 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60061607839 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.530303030303 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.9696900099 49.4020404114 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.555555556 106.682146367 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.3333333333 20.7667163134 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.66666666667 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251453047134 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127990302398 0.084324248473 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0511888176815 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153037616216 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.062976055073 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.58 50.2224549098 67% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.08 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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