While some people consider global warming to be the most pressing environmental problem which we have at the moment, others believe that deforestation has a more devastating impact on our world. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
Although it is argued by many that the issue of increasing the planet's average temperature is globally the biggest worry, others consider that the impact of deforestation is more destroying the world. In my opinion, I believe that to tackle the issue of global warming, deforestation must be taken control firstly.
Global warming is leading to a number of disastrous consequences in relation to the environment. Firstly, the annual gradual increase of the average temperature is extremely impacting on the climate change, and making the Earth become difficult to live physically. Secondly, changes resulting may include rising sea level due to the melting of the polar ice caps, as well as an increase in occurrence and severity of storms, deluge. Therefore, to deal with the problems is the highest preference.
However, one of the reasons leading to global warming is the lack of areas of forest cover. The destruction of forest areas has resulted in a degraded environment. In other words, the increased volumes of carbon dioxide and other greenhouse gases released by agriculture, and other human activities is destroying the Earth's environment. Those are considered to be the primary sources of heat accumulating in air or heat emissions. In addition, deforestation also results in a significant loss of the biodiversity. Hence, if people deal with deforestation then not only global warming but also biodiversity issues can be solved.
In conclusion, the removal of trees without sufficient reforestation is the fact that human must firstly think about when to solve the issue of changing the global average temperature.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'firstly', 'hence', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'then', 'therefore', 'well', 'in addition', 'in conclusion', 'as well as', 'in my opinion', 'in other words']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.268707482993 0.247107183377 109% => OK
Verbs: 0.142857142857 0.155533422707 92% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0986394557823 0.0946595960268 104% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0578231292517 0.0501214627716 115% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0102040816327 0.0437548338989 23% => More pronouns wanted.
Prepositions: 0.132653061224 0.122226691241 109% => OK
Participles: 0.0612244897959 0.0403226058552 152% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.14402253676 2.80594681477 112% => OK
Infinitives: 0.030612244898 0.0326793684256 94% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => More particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.105442176871 0.0861772015684 122% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0136054421769 0.021408717616 64% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00340136054422 0.011925033212 29% => More subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, whom, Whose, That.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1646.0 1933.35771543 85% => OK
No of words: 258.0 316.048096192 82% => OK
Chars per words: 6.37984496124 6.12580529183 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20517956788 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.434108527132 0.374742101984 116% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.341085271318 0.28420135186 120% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.22480620155 0.203846283523 110% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.158914728682 0.137316102897 116% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14402253676 2.80594681477 112% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.037074148 87% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593023255814 0.56093040696 106% => OK
Word variations: 61.7474671358 60.7387585426 102% => OK
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0891783567 81% => OK
Sentence length: 19.8461538462 20.7743622355 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.6549717665 49.517814964 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.615384615 127.492653851 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8461538462 20.7743622355 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.46153846154 0.814263465372 179% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 3.99599198397 0% => OK
Readability: 53.9546809779 49.1944974215 110% => OK
Elegance: 2.1935483871 1.69124875643 130% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273890127029 0.332605444948 82% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.124973149713 0.102741220458 122% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0703794563273 0.0668466124924 105% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.607365905533 0.534860350844 114% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.173886173988 0.148594505496 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133976990285 0.134430193775 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0535400363284 0.0742795772207 72% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.437358226649 0.324371583561 135% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0393810861225 0.0638462369009 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209868531348 0.228012699653 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.053749234181 0.058150111329 92% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.68436873747 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.41683366733 29% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 3.0 5.90881763527 51% => OK
Negative topic words: 6.0 2.5751503006 233% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 1.9629258517 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 9.0 10.4468937876 86% => OK
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay E-rater: 7.0 Out of 9