“Whoever controls the media also controls opinion s and attitudes of the people and there is little that can be done to rectify this.”
I think each person who curbs the media not only could not make slight effects on people’s idea but also motivate them so as to be more informed.
To begin with, controlling the media has various reasons. Such as, religious point and political goal to keep people totally unaware. There are several reasons howerer, in this writing these issues considered.
Initially, we emphasize on the religious point, which censors struggle dramatically to control every thing that is despite the religion. For instance Muslim’s women ought to wear scarf also nowhere of their body should be visible, then the censor’s mission is to eliminate the parts of movie that have drawbacks. The same as censorship in politics each news that shows positive aspect of their regime is appropriate on the other hand the negative aspect should include censorship.
Secondly, while the censorship occurs in a nation. People will not follow the media, which government supports, indeed, they find some media to help them grasping the world’s view of each issue. In other words, whether our government do censorship on news, we can listen to the world wide channels such as BBC news, since they considered all of the world’s events, similarly, if they control a movie you can find an original one. Consequently, many ways have been found which you can bring significant changes into censorship.
In conclusion, I am absolutely disagree about whether censor could control people’s opinion and attitude, specially when all of the people are fully aware, since they never let any one or any group to conquer their mentality. Also plenty of works could have done to reform this such as banning government media.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2016-02-29 | mahsaj1985 | 70 | view |
- “Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world.Do you think this is positive or negative development?” 70
- “Whoever controls the media also controls opinion s and attitudes of the people and there is little that can be done to rectify this.” 70
Performance in Part of Speech:
adjectives: 0.107936507937 106%
verbs: 0.152380952381 110%
nouns: 0.250793650794 90%
pronouns: 0.0444444444444 117%
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 120, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...on people’s idea but also motivate them so as to be more informed. To begin with, contr...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 160, Rule ID: MORFOLOGIK_RULE_EN_US
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: however
...ally unaware. There are several reasons howerer, in this writing these issues considere...
^^^^^^^
Line 8, column 154, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[10]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to grasp' or 'grasp'.
Suggestion: to grasp; grasp
...deed, they find some media to help them grasping the world’s view of each issue. In othe...
^^^^^^^^
Line 8, column 278, Rule ID: WORLD_WIDE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'worldwide'?
Suggestion: worldwide
...ensorship on news, we can listen to the world wide channels such as BBC news, since they c...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 8, column 338, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...such as BBC news, since they considered all of the world’s events, similarly, if they cont...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 10, column 32, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'disagreed'.
Suggestion: disagreed
...orship. In conclusion, I am absolutely disagree about whether censor could control peop...
^^^^^^^^
Line 10, column 122, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...’s opinion and attitude, specially when all of the people are fully aware, since they neve...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 10, column 178, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'anyone'?
Suggestion: anyone
...e are fully aware, since they never let any one or any group to conquer their mentality...
^^^^^^^
Performance in lexical resources and sentences:
No of characters: 1693 87%
No of words: 277 88%
Chars per words: 6.08992805755 99%
Fourth root words length: 6.41452112187 97%
Word length more than 5 chars: 83 88%
Word length more than 6 chars: 64 87%
Word length more than 7 chars: 44 82%
Word length more than 8 chars: 30 82%
Word Length SD: 2.59933313219 93%
Unique words percentage: 0.649819494585 116%
How many sentences: 13 82%
Sentence length: 21.3076923077 104%
Sentence length SD: 59.4182845964 129%
Chars per sentence: 75.8931034483 82%
Words per sentence: 12.4172413793 82%
Use of Discourse Markers: 0.469314079422 149%
Scores by essay E-rater: 6.0 out of 9