“Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world.
Do you think this is positive or negative development?”
I think it is beneficial that people around the world can use some products, which are not their native products everywhere in the world. Since this facility make the living easier than before.
First and for most, according to globalization, it includes food products as well. For instance special fruits like banana and pineapple are farmed and grown in tropical countries and so, you can not find them in cold weather countries. However, we can find these fruits in the coldest countries like Russia and Canada. Then, fortunately Canadian could gain banana’s advantages the same as Malaysian.
Furthermore, for immigrants, it becomes easier so that they never miss their national food. For instance, when they want to cook a food with special vegetable, which farmed in a faraway country in the past, now they can also find it in a country they immigrate to.
Finally, there is a need for people to utilize every product in every location all around the globe. Then, some of the products were vital for some people and these kept them away to travel to remote places, while nowadays everywhere you can reach to a goal that you have for the eating and so, each person can take advantage of some special products, which are appropriate for some kind of illnesses.
In consequence, in contrast to the past majority of things become much more available nowadays. So, it has an impact on the quality of life and almost leads people to enjoy their life entirely.
- “Whoever controls the media also controls opinion s and attitudes of the people and there is little that can be done to rectify this.” 70
- “Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world.Do you think this is positive or negative development?” 70
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 139, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ative products everywhere in the world. Since this facility make the living easier th...
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Line 5, column 130, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'food'.
Suggestion: food
...d. For instance, when they want to cook a food with special vegetable, which farmed in...
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 108, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...ry location all around the globe. Then, some of the products were vital for some people and...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'finally', 'first', 'furthermore', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'then', 'well', 'while', 'for instance', 'i think', 'in contrast', 'kind of', 'in contrast to']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.207142857143 0.247107548796 84% => OK
Verbs: 0.121428571429 0.15552993741 78% => OK
Adjectives: 0.075 0.0946569551029 79% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0678571428571 0.0437536398559 155% => OK
Prepositions: 0.132142857143 0.122223957237 108% => OK
Participles: 0.0107142857143 0.0403219363162 27% => More participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.51471191193 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0321428571429 0.0326786765898 98% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => More particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.103571428571 0.0861751148067 120% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.025 0.0214082191602 117% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0142857142857 0.0119246538136 120% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1472.0 1933.38276553 76% => OK
No of words: 250.0 316.052104208 79% => More words wanted.
Chars per words: 5.86454183267 6.10592293882 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20519365927 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.332 0.37474360046 89% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.228 0.284197041944 80% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.168 0.203843217982 82% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.108 0.137313986986 79% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51471191193 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588 0.560935902166 105% => OK
Word variations: 60.1288503955 60.7401812628 99% => OK
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0911823647 75% => OK
Sentence length: 20.8333333333 20.7725350517 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.8096772445 49.5273876611 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.4198473282 93.4120437189 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.4503816794 15.2821509519 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.687022900763 0.594174754866 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.39078156313 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01102204409 60% => OK
Readability: 43.6333333333 49.1922392462 89% => OK
Elegance: 1.28947368421 1.69127372897 76% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Topic essay coherence: 0.326585902706 0.332604825255 98% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.105787211255 0.102734651613 103% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.108105019087 0.0668474354756 162% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.606263899911 0.534917948617 113% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.181083364166 0.148666948902 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128256011714 0.13441755203 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0692417488325 0.0742828286743 93% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.187598475928 0.324241079732 58% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0342029073097 0.0640056729886 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196277822766 0.22793763319 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0702014975868 0.0582452615562 121% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.68436873747 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.41883767535 58% => OK
Positive topic words: 10.0 5.88977955912 170% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.60220440882 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.00200400802 50% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 11.0 10.493987976 105% => OK
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Rates: 65.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay E-rater: 6.0 Out of 9