One of the most conspicuous trend of today's world is colossal upsurge in number of people believing that first human who step on Moon said that it is the biggest achievement for humanity on last century while other say it make little difference to individuals day to day lives. In my opinion, the formal apprehension sound more rational.
To commence with, there are deluges of arguments in favor of astronaut who believe that arriving on Moon is a big step for human. The most preponderant one is that it helps in find solution. To elaborate it, as their numerous of issue those solution were impossible for humans to search on Earth and they get from Moon or on other planet such as chemicals those help in forming medicine which assist in healing dangerous disease. It can not only contribute to solving issue on our planet, but also lead to numerous other benefits in various field such as increasing employment. Thanks to wide range of advantage astronaut offers, masses can enhance productivity and quality of their lives much ease and efficacy. Needless to say, all these merits stand in one good stead, as far as their are augment chance of prosperity and excellence is concerned.
Furthermore, another pivotal aspect of aforementioned prostration is that it is only likely to help one excel and thrive in varied areas by changing their dream. This is because, now most of young people wants to go on space research. For instance, a study result published by the government of Australia in March 2012, clearly indicate that 30% of student in each nation want to be a astronaut. Hence, it is clear that why many are in favor of this viewpoint.
On the other hand, a section of society contradict above said view that ensure arriving on the Moon is not a big step for mankind while it make only few changes in our today's life. The primary factor is that it only provide change to travel on other planet. To explain it, as their are not much outcome seen in the research's which made my space traveler has made ill now and some of them are not useful for humans. Therefore, some are not in of favor above said viewpoint.
To conclude, having ponder over above said it is crystal clear that a human astronaut first arrived on Moon is the biggest step for mankind is indeed too great of ignore.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 223, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'makes'?
Suggestion: makes
...nity on last century while other say it make little difference to individuals day to...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...luges of arguments in favor of astronaut who believe that arriving on Moon is a b...
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Line 2, column 236, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this solution' or 'those solutions'?
Suggestion: this solution; those solutions
...laborate it, as their numerous of issue those solution were impossible for humans to search on...
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Message: Did you mean 'there'?
Suggestion: there
...rits stand in one good stead, as far as their are augment chance of prosperity and ex...
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Line 2, column 793, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'augmented'.
Suggestion: augmented
... in one good stead, as far as their are augment chance of prosperity and excellence is ...
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Line 3, column 183, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the young') or simply say ''most young''.
Suggestion: most of the young; most young
...nging their dream. This is because, now most of young people wants to go on space research. F...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...0% of student in each nation want to be a astronaut. Hence, it is clear that why ...
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Message: Did you mean 'there'?
Suggestion: there
...avel on other planet. To explain it, as their are not much outcome seen in the resear...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, hence, if, so, therefore, while, for instance, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 67.0 41.998997996 160% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1895.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 406.0 315.596192385 129% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66748768473 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48881294772 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53285456134 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539408866995 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 607.5 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.257974295 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.470588235 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8823529412 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276092767873 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0744840604341 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0945162836832 0.0667982634062 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159783473387 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0742626861722 0.056905535591 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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