1. Some people prefer travelling alone when they experience a new country or culture, while others prefer having some company. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays, more and more people give privilege to travelling on their own. According to some, this is the best way, as, they argue, that people will be able to have a better understanding of a new culture and make acquisitions more easily. And there may be some merit in this view. Yet, in what follows it will be argued that travelling with a company can make the journey more memorable and straighten relationships.
Firstly, it is crucial to have a nice company while travelling, as this will enable people to make great memories. people make the most out of their journey, by sharing the experience of exploring new countries and places with their friend or family members. For instance, last month my friends and I visited our neighboring country and enjoyed ourselves from trying to dance their traditional dances. Moreover, a loved one can give a special meaning to even an ordinary place.
Secondly, people can get closer to their companion while travelling together, as this will give them an opportunity to spend ample time together as well as get to know each other better. Modern life leaves little time for socializing, since everyone is mostly engaged in their daily life pattern. Therefore, sometimes taking vacations is the only possible option to interact with friends and relatives. In addition, it is surprising how much people can learn about each other while touring.
In conclusion, it was demonstrated that having a company during travel can result in an unforgettable journey and stronger relationships. Though some believe that traveling alone will lead to integrating into a new culture and finding new friends, still, in my opinion, people should have a companion while travelling.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, well, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1454.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1743772242 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78896867537 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594306049822 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.8449657178 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.857142857 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0714285714 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0714285714 7.06120827912 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24326728487 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0822966442388 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0647147145272 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149135855772 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0503012452652 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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