(2) Computers are often argued to be the most important invention of the last hundred years. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In the last ten decades, the world sometimes considers computers as one of the major technical developments. From my perspective, I do completely agree with this point of view, for they help people connect with each other and offer some benefits to make life easier.
First of all, computers bring everyone together. For example, with the explosive growth of the Internet, now people can use their computer to read online articles about world affairs and keep themselves updated with the occurrence. In addition, people can contact one another on social networking sites like Facebook and Twitter, which is specially useful for families that spread over a wider geographical area: if parents want to talk with their children who study abroad, they just turn on their computer, log in to their Facebook account and start to chat with them. When we look back on many years ago, we had to buy newspaper to catch up with the news and write letters to exchange information with our relatives, which was costly and time-consuming.
Another point I want to make is that computers can be a valuable tool to aid everybody with their tasks. For one thing, it can store our data and documents. Long time ago, our ancestors had a lot of shelves in the house to keep written materials, pictures and books. But now, computers can store thousands of files and save space in our home. Moreover, a computer manufacturer like IBM has created a great number of supercomputers for NASA to calculate the complex formulas. Therefore, scientists are able to draw up sound plans for astronauts to fly into space with modern spacecraft.
In conclusion, computers have been an important invention in human history. It not only functions as a form of communication but also has some utilities to please the contemporary world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, for example, in addition, in conclusion, first of all, for one thing
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1506.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9702970297 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77634072774 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.640264026403 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.234629563 49.4020404114 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.571428571 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6428571429 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.64285714286 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143639356568 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0494955109467 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0348706780606 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0912588098553 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0320804985443 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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