2. Free-style: someone i admire / An influential person
In our life , most people have an idol such as a singer , an actor , a billionaire and so on in their mind. They admire their idol because of their idol's lifestyle and qualities . Someone I admire is my mother due to her love and sacrifice for family members
She has not ever enraged with us . Instead of compassionate , tolerance that I am able to get from her . The vase which I broke when i was 6 ages , and my mom was afford of me because I might have some injuries . Since this moment , she has thrown all of glass vases , and she used plastic vases in the house . In short , all of my mistake which i made , but she never has enraged .
In addition , she makes me feeling due to her an action . Most great food she gives to me is delicious.I almost get good everything from my mother . She always minds family members more than her which make me love her so much .For example, During the Lunar New Year, my mother buys everything for everyone in the family, but she forgets to buy for her. To sum up , the sacrifice of her can not discride by voice , words . It is sacred and sublime.
In conclusion , most mothers in the word are respected and admired because of their qualities . I hope other people also mind like me , and my mother is idol who i admire and love a lot .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in short, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 24.0651302605 187% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1055.0 1615.20841683 65% => OK
No of words: 245.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.30612244898 5.12529762239 84% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41788319033 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 334.8 506.74238477 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.2593143411 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.9166666667 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4166666667 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 39.0 5.01903807615 777% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0808955516004 0.244688304435 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0333818159229 0.084324248473 40% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0417930616001 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0638544446753 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0617517929272 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 50.2224549098 136% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.72 12.4159519038 62% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.01 8.58950901804 82% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 78.4519038076 47% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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