Planting trees is important is very important for the environment. Some people says trees should be planted in vacant areas of cities and towns, while others says housing facilities should be build instead. Do you agree or disagree?
The environment has been deteriorate. Most people know the environment is very important, and they think planting trees should be planted in vacant ereas in cities and towns. However, the others object that, and I disagree with ones because of facilities and people.
Nowadays, there are lots of housing facilities. A mount of emission is emited alot by housing facilities. The emission is more than trees that plated by people and in nature. The trees are able to emit oxygen for the earth. In fact that, Greenhouse effect warns of serious pollution in many develop country. The countries that have many facilities.
Moreover, people also affect on environment a lot. The garbages, wastes and carbon dioxite are emited by people countlessly annually. Especially, the migrants and the slums is in the world, they are also many reasons to make polution. For this reason, planting trees just be in housing facilitis that is not enough to prevent polution.
In conclusion, I object the planting trees is in housing facilities. It isn't enough for environment , nature and people. The planting trees becomes popular in the world because of the green , clean environment.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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The environment has been deteriorate. Mo...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'deteriorated'.
Suggestion: deteriorated
The environment has been deteriorate. Most people know the environment is ve...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ones because of facilities and people. Nowadays, there are lots of housing fac...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...ple. Nowadays, there are lots of housing facilities. A mount of emission ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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... countries that have many facilities. Moreover, people also affect on environm...
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Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
...ilities. Moreover, people also affect on environment a lot. The garbages, wastes...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...hat is not enough to prevent polution. In conclusion, I object the planting tre...
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Suggestion: isn't
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...cilities. It isnt enough for environment , nature and people. The planting trees b...
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Suggestion: ,
...opular in the world because of the green , clean environment.
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...se of the green , clean environment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, moreover, so, in conclusion, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 983.0 1615.20841683 61% => OK
No of words: 190.0 315.596192385 60% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17368421053 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 4.20363070211 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72943999108 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 176.041082164 60% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557894736842 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 301.5 506.74238477 59% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 9.0 2.52805611222 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 20.2975951904 54% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.3592962729 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 61.4375 106.682146367 58% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.875 20.7667163134 57% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 3.1875 7.06120827912 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 3.4128256513 322% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.323621553794 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.093999961234 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0972405236768 0.0667982634062 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202117176058 0.151304729494 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0912797084464 0.056905535591 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 13.0946893788 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.31 50.2224549098 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.82 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.1190380762 63% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
The environment has been deteriorate. Mo...
^^^^^^
Line 1, column 32, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'deteriorated'.
Suggestion: deteriorated
The environment has been deteriorate. Most people know the environment is ve...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ones because of facilities and people. Nowadays, there are lots of housing fac...
^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 35, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ple. Nowadays, there are lots of housing facilities. A mount of emission ...
^^
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... countries that have many facilities. Moreover, people also affect on environm...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 30, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
...ilities. Moreover, people also affect on environment a lot. The garbages, wastes...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hat is not enough to prevent polution. In conclusion, I object the planting tre...
^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 80, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: isn't
...ting trees is in housing facilities. It isnt enough for environment , nature and peo...
^^^^
Line 4, column 107, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...cilities. It isnt enough for environment , nature and people. The planting trees b...
^^
Line 4, column 197, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...opular in the world because of the green , clean environment.
^^
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...se of the green , clean environment.
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, moreover, so, in conclusion, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 983.0 1615.20841683 61% => OK
No of words: 190.0 315.596192385 60% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17368421053 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 4.20363070211 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72943999108 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 176.041082164 60% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557894736842 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 301.5 506.74238477 59% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 9.0 2.52805611222 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 20.2975951904 54% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.3592962729 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 61.4375 106.682146367 58% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.875 20.7667163134 57% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 3.1875 7.06120827912 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 3.4128256513 322% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.323621553794 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.093999961234 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0972405236768 0.0667982634062 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202117176058 0.151304729494 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0912797084464 0.056905535591 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 13.0946893788 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.31 50.2224549098 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.82 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.1190380762 63% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.