4 More and more people go on touring and travelling What are its advantages and disadvantages Give your own opinion
Majority people are required tourism and excursion. Nowadays with the help of technological progress as laptops or mobile phones humanity can in an easy way find the place, where he or she wants to go to an excursion, and in definite website they may buy cheeper tickets for bus, train and other public transports or can get certificate for flight. Of course, the tourism industry is changing fastly, and its attract more travallers all over the world per year, but there are some advantages and disadvatages.
On the one hand, the benefits of touring are being refreshed from every day bouring works, therefore meeting new friends in that place, know and learn some theirs national parks, industries, or unusual magnificent areas , and even places which makes many attract at the first sight are help for that, and its exposes guests to various people and their traditions and customs. Its connection helps to travellers to understand in a new light, which could be helpful to palliate pressure in political conflict period.
On the other hand, not each country suitable for human beings, for instance in Paris, local people have a meal from marine animals, especially from frogs, not only in that town, but also in other foreign countries have different understanding of foods and drinks, that is why not all travellers could have a journey in everywhere constantly.
To end, as mentioned before I would say that travelling and doing journey are equal to education, every tourist may go some cities with their friend or family, this kind of trip can make people closer to each other, despite their cultures, customs or traditions and also their different appearances.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider replacing "in an easy way" with adverb for "easy"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
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Suggestion: ,
...industries, or unusual magnificent areas , and even places which makes many attrac...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, so, therefore, for instance, kind of, of course, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1395.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03610108303 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61910276448 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.638989169675 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 0.809619238477 865% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 39.0 20.2975951904 192% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 111.943498868 49.4020404114 227% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 199.285714286 106.682146367 187% => OK
Words per sentence: 39.5714285714 20.7667163134 191% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.2857142857 7.06120827912 188% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130592149452 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0627964001035 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0358706687165 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0698019233324 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0250763661106 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.1 13.0946893788 169% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.35 50.2224549098 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 11.3001002004 153% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.68 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.6 10.1190380762 174% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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