4 More and more people go on touring and travelling What are its advantages and disadvantages Give your own opinion
Majority people are required tourism and excursion. Nowadays with the help of technological progress as laptops or mobile phones, humanity can in an easy way find the cities, where he or she wants to go to an excursion, and in definite website they may buy cheeper tickets for bus, train and other public transports or they can get certificate for flight. Definitely, the tourism industry is changing fastly, and its attract more travallers all over the world per year, but there are some advantages and disadvatages.
On the one hand, the benefits of touring are being refreshed from every day bouring works, therefore meeting new friends in that place, know and learn some theirs national parks, industries, or unusual magnificent areas , even places which makes many attract at the first sight are help for that position, and its exposes guests to various people and their traditions and customs. Its connection helps to travellers to understand in a new light, which could be helpful to palliate pressure in political conflict period.
On the other hand, not each country suitable for human beings, for instance Paris, local people have the special meals from marine animals, especially from frogs, not only in that town, but also in other foreign countries there are different understanding of foods and drinks, that is why not all travellers could have a journey in everywhere, and not all dreams comes to performance, constantly.
To end, as mentioned before, I would say that travelling and doing journey are equal to education, every tourist may go some cities with their friend or family, this kind of trip can make people closer to each other, despite their cultures, customs or traditions and also their different appearances.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 144, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in an easy way" with adverb for "easy"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... laptops or mobile phones, humanity can in an easy way find the cities, where he or she wants ...
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Line 2, column 220, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...industries, or unusual magnificent areas , even places which makes many attract at...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, so, therefore, for instance, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1456.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10877192982 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65669848652 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.638596491228 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 0.809619238477 865% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 40.0 20.2975951904 197% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 121.612969233 49.4020404114 246% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 208.0 106.682146367 195% => OK
Words per sentence: 40.7142857143 20.7667163134 196% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.7142857143 7.06120827912 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130032475835 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.062616802614 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0360462187614 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0690890406364 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0245410669397 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.0 13.0946893788 176% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.34 50.2224549098 78% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.7 11.3001002004 157% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.25 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.05 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.0 10.1190380762 178% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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