8. With the development of the media online, there is no future for the radio. Do you agree.
Media is an omnipresent tool in this fast-paced society. Some may agree that with the advancements in media, the purpose of radio has become irrelevant. However, I believe that radio has significant contribution to the society.
Proponents may argue that with booming mass media such as the internet, television and social media, the functions of radio have diminished with regards to its frequency only being available in open areas and hence, limiting its use to remote places. Radio has also been replaced substantially by these media outlets because of its declining target audience. In early times, radio used to be a source of entertainment when preparing a meal, to listen to the early news or get updated commentary on live sport events. Nowadays, these roles have drastically catered only to the elderly as youngsters prefer the internet to browse through the songs and news.
Having said that, radio plays a pivotal element in today’s world. It is a prevalent factor during emergencies such as earthquakes or when a car passes through the tunnel. In addition, it still serves entertainment in rural areas where there are limited media platforms. Moreover, radio signifies a symbol for many households where it is continues to be used as leisure time for songs or commentary channels. For example, in India, many households tune in to the radio in the early mornings for the news while they engage in their activities. Hence, this shows that there is a future for the radio.
In brief, radio always will be instrumental in today’s world.
- 9 Some people believe that what children watch on television influences their behaviour Others say that amount of time spent watching television influences their behaviour discuss both views and give opinion 78
- 6 In the last few decades there have been more and more cases of famous people being hounded by the press Some people think that famous people in the media have no right privacy To what extent do you agree 89
- 8 With the development of the media online there is no future for the radio Do you agree 56
- More and more people are suffering from health problems caused by modern lifestyle which cannot be treated with modern medicines Some people think that a return to traditional medicine should be encouraged To what extent do you agree 61
- Some people believe that what children watch on television influences their behaviour Others say that amount of time spent watching television influences their behaviour discuss both views and give opinion 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 67, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'agrees'.
Suggestion: agrees
...ol in this fast-paced society. Some may agree that with the advancements in media, th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, may, moreover, so, still, while, for example, in addition, in brief, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1308.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.109375 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78769442988 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5859375 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 413.1 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.3965904256 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.4285714286 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2857142857 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.64285714286 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258699677497 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0903378737622 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0714684189077 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147095697693 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0597080356175 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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