More and more people are suffering from health problems caused by modern lifestyle which cannot be treated with modern medicines. Some people think that a return to traditional medicine should be encouraged. To what extent do you agree?
In this fast-paced society, contemporary lifestyle has undoubtedly presented with invariable health risks. Some may agree that these risks cannot be cured with current medicines but instead with traditional medicine. In my opinion, I agree with this statement that traditional medicine should be promoted in today's society.
Proponents may argue that present-day way of life brings about alarming rate of type 2 diabetes, high cholesterol levels and cardiovascular risks due to the sedentary lifestyle that people face nowadays. These health problems are treated more efficiently with modern medications such as insulin injection for diabetic patients. Moreover, emergency situations like stroke due to prolonged blood pressure require the immediate attention of advanced equipment in modern medicine to treat these cases. Hence, it is sometimes necessary to rely on current medicine for the cure.
Having said that, conventional medicines should be promoted to curb issues like obesity and diabetes. Firstly, long-established medicines are proven to have less side effects which is a pivotal factor that many elderly look into. Moreover, they have long-term benefits in treating a disease. One of such traditional medicine is acupuncture which is a renowned traditional chinese medicine that has effective results in treating current issues like gout where the high uric acid is formed in parts of the body. Another well-known traditional medicine is ayurvedic which is popular in India for its long-term effects that it possesses for the patients such as the beneficial weight loss treatment has proven to promote a healthier diet among the patients. As a result, traditional medicine should not be ignored and instead it should be encouraged.
In conclusion, modern diseases should be treated with both traditional and current medicine.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 117, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'agrees'.
Suggestion: agrees
... with invariable health risks. Some may agree that these risks cannot be cured with c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, if, look, may, moreover, so, well, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1571.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.65107913669 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93469851253 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586330935252 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.7616147869 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.214285714 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8571428571 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.07142857143 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.37753839694 0.244688304435 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132383611903 0.084324248473 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0791218923694 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.229784726641 0.151304729494 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0298452242083 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.49 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.63 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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