In about 140 words, write a paragraph about a leisure activity that you like to do after school
After school, the activity which I big on spending my leisure time for is playing slime.
For definition, it is a half-solid, half-liquid stress relief toy. In 2013, slime was officially introduced and became ubiquitous during 2017-2018. It has developed through years and come out with various kinds and textures with marvelous designs.
There are a great many advantages playing with slime, the most remarkable benefit of it is building skills. It's no longer a simple toy since slime lovers had started creating YouTube channels and Instagram accounts just about slime and makes it become a tremendous trend which helps them reach billions of subscribers and followers. These "slimers" earn a great deal of money from YouTube which also needs them to improve their quality and content of their videos which help them develop skills for editing professional and well-contented videos and posts. Some of them run a slime business and have a major income when they are just little teenagers which gives them an idea about how to run a business from the young ages.
Besides building skills, it is also used as effective stress relieve toy and make the children more creative while thinking about the way to create a new texture or thinking of creating new designs. Therefore, it also helps the children spend less of their time on video games as well as other detrimental activities.
In brief, playing slime is recently my most go-to free time spending activity due to its marvelous pros with almost no cons.
- In about 140 words write a paragraph about a leisure activity that you like to do after school 36
- Do you think your country s membership in ASEAN affects your daily life How do you think ASEAN can help your country address a challenge such as climate change creating new jobs or health issues in the 21st century 93
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 109, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
...kable benefit of it is building skills. Its no longer a simple toy since slime love...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, so, therefore, well, while, in brief, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1279.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0753968254 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69550204832 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.619047619048 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 381.6 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.3835741863 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.272727273 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9090909091 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.72727272727 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0836461735536 0.244688304435 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0328492511811 0.084324248473 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0507362041183 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0585511094279 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0613268980809 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.67 Out of 6
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