Do you think your country’s membership in ASEAN affects your daily life? How do you think ASEAN can help your country address a challenge (such as climate change, creating new jobs, or health issues) in the 21st century?
The Association of Southeast Asian Nations (ASEAN) has undoubtedly played a prominent role in negotiating and collaborating with the aim of mutual development and peace promotion amongst member countries. This is not just between the governments but also affects the citizen's daily lives. From my viewpoint, I do believe ASEAN will do wonder for Vietnam, especially in creating job opportunities.
Thanks to the ASEAN Economic Community, the taxes incurred between countries are minimizing, which allows us to purchase goods more economically and diminish the cost of living. In other words, we can now buy foods and goods with decreasing prices. Furthermore, ASEAN is providing opportunities for entrepreneurs to set up companies notwithstanding the borders, which means we may have access to better medical care and education, ect.. Air travel and tourism are improving that we will be able to fly to other regions with lower and lower costs. As a result, citizen's quality of life improves from the daily level.
Through recognition of educational and technical qualifications, labors in eight professions including doctors, dentists, nurses, accountants, surveyors, architects, engineers, and tourism professionals, can freely find jobs without barriers. This assists Vietnam in reducing the unemployment rate and improving labor quality. What is more, the association creates exchange programs and conferences in which people have an opportunity to improve their skills and professions. Hopefully, ASEAN will remain this policy and encourage countries to be more financially opened.
In conclusion, the membership of Vietnam in ASEAN has a great impact on my daily life and people's chances of getting jobs and Vietnam in general. I hope the ASEAN would keep up the fellowship among the member states so that people from those nations would continue to be benefited from the established policies.
- The essay topic is the image below. 11
- Do you think your country s membership in ASEAN affects your daily life How do you think ASEAN can help your country address a challenge such as climate change creating new jobs or health issues in the 21st century 93
- In about 140 words write a paragraph about a leisure activity that you like to do after school 36
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 435, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
...o better medical care and education, ect.. Air travel and tourism are improving th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, may, so, in general, as a result, in other words, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1618.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.57931034483 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12833698171 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.634482758621 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.6263300283 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.571428571 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7142857143 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.42857142857 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139312548785 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0467560548718 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0391402824133 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0843157515484 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0274285016989 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.08 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.24 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.33 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.