According to an international travel magazine, many tourists today fly straight to their holiday resort and almost never leave it. Unlike tourist in the 1960s and 70s, they return home with no experience of the local culture.
Why do you think this happen? How was tourism different in the past?
Nowadays, people usually go to their tourist destination by a direct flight and stay in quite impressive modern hotels, so they have no chance to see local residents in comparison with the past. In this regard, holidaymakers definitely come back to their cities with no experience of their destination culture.
The first cause of the fact why visitors in the past could obtain more experience is that they accommodated in caravanserai at nights, therefore, the habitual behavior of the inhabitants was seen by visitors during the companionship. The second reason is tourists went on a trip by some animals like horses or monkeys. So, traveling at a place usually took ages and there was a great chance for encountering the difficult situations to experience new things. Moreover, people traveled rarely for leisure and the main reasons were trade or adventure and they knew they would be challenge with real risks.
Today, tourism has changed and tourists set off a journey not only for a job, but also mostly for holidays. In this framework, visitors go straightly to a destination by fast trains or airplanes. This is the best solution to reply the hectic lifestyle but it cause they will be deprived of a lot of experiences to be familiar with a new culture. In addition, staying in comfortable unique suits cause holidaymakers be away from local residents. Furthermore, people roughly prefer to go off a beaten track during off-peak period. In other words, the tendency of visitors has been changed to being in a peace and quiet places with no noisy people.
As a consequence, tourism has taken another shape in comparison with the past regarding this fact that today tourists are getting less experience about the culture of their destinations by changing the way of traveling and accommodating.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 477, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[9]
Message: The adverb 'rarely' is usually put before the verb 'traveled'.
Suggestion: rarely traveled
...experience new things. Moreover, people traveled rarely for leisure and the main reasons were t...
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Line 3, column 605, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hey would be challenge with real risks. Today, tourism has changed and tourists ...
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Line 5, column 260, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'causes'?
Suggestion: causes
...on to reply the hectic lifestyle but it cause they will be deprived of a lot of exper...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, regarding, second, so, therefore, in addition, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1514.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0635451505 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91743484018 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585284280936 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.3143231789 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.461538462 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.15384615385 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222320864931 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0766481196641 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0503138968597 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146323098885 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0371244291735 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.