Nowadays, people who have natural aptitude for performing a work can participate in a talent TV shows and experience a big challenge in different countries. This essay will first discuss about this method as an effective way for introducing skillful people and also depict how these favorite shows can be considered as a pleasure program.
The most significant things why these televised shows are excellent for finding intelligent people is that it is an easy, fast and usually free method for participants. Numerous people with natural ability can just register in a competition and assay themselves in front of the massive viewers' eyes. The lonely restriction for these competitions is financial consideration which means the show's producer is able to make the program for a long time. For instance, there was a live show for finding the best singer in my country but after a few months it was not continued.
With regards to the question of entertainment, I speculate these programs are very good for who wants to have a broadcast hobby in spare time, although the competitors, either who win a prize or not, have fun in a healthy competition. Moreover, other people with every skills will be fostered to find their natural qualifications by watching these occasions. For example, I am fond of superior intelligence competitions and after watching an entertaining program I test myself in a radio broadcast.
As a consequence, TV talent shows are absolutely fantastic programs not only for finding people who are enthusiastic about a skill because of their natural talent, but also are amusement for people in different ages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 390, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'shows'' or 'show's'?
Suggestion: shows'; show's
...financial consideration which means the shows producer is able to make the program fo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, so, thus, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1372.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13857677903 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01597443339 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591760299625 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 36.6088787045 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.2 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.7 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.7 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209924307556 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0883951306453 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.049932435225 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137579572847 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0257587914083 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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