One of the most conspicuous trend of today's world is colossal upsurge in number of grown ups argue that life in early age and at school is best as compared to present. There are wide range of reason that ensure why they think so. In my opinion, this apprehension sounds more rational.
To commence with, there are deluge of arguments in favor of saying that life in childhood was better. The most preponderant one is that in early age they have not any burden. To elaborate it, child have not much work to do they just have to study and enjoy game. As grown ups have to word to fulfill their family and their own needs. It can not only contribute to happy life, but also lead to numerous other benefits in various fields. Thanks to wide range of advantage school age offers, they can enhance their productively and quality of their lives much ease and efficacy by enjoying games and study. Needless to say, all these merits stand in one good stead, as far as augmenting their chance of posterity and excellence is concerned.
Furthermore, another pivotal aspect of aforementioned proposition it is only likely to help one excel and thrive by making more friends. This is because, children can make more friend at school with whom they spend their most of time while adults have not enough time spend with their near and dear once. For instance, a study result published by the government of Australia in March 2013, clearly indicate that person make more friends in his early age and spend more time with them as compare to time when they grown up. Hence, it is clear that why many are in favor of this viewpoint.
On the other hand, a section society contradict above said that life of adults is better than children. The primary factor is that they have freedom. To explain it, child have to live under surveillance of their parents and teacher but adults can more independently where they want to be. Therefore, some are not favor above said viewpoint.
To conclude, having ponder over above said view is that life is good in childhood and classroom than in adults is indeed too great to ignore.
- The graph below shows how money was spent on different forms of entertainment over a five year period 78
- The graph below shows how money was spent on different forms of entertainment over a five year period
- Some people think that cultural traditions will be destroyed if they are used as money making attractions aimed at tourists Others however believe that is the only way to save these traditions Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 78
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- Writing task 1 The Car Ownership in the UK from 1975 to 2005 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 29, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'deluges'?
Suggestion: deluges
... rational. To commence with, there are deluge of arguments in favor of saying that li...
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Line 3, column 513, Rule ID: PRP_PAST_PART[1]
Message: Possible grammatical error. You used a past participle without using any required verb ('be' or 'have'). Did you mean 'grew'?
Suggestion: grew
... with them as compare to time when they grown up. Hence, it is clear that why many ar...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, if, so, therefore, while, for instance, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 63.0 41.998997996 150% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1730.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 373.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63806970509 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39467950092 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37399728724 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533512064343 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 547.2 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.7524781449 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.0526315789 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6315789474 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.42105263158 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 8.67935871743 196% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192151024348 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0633546183325 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0660122586437 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118033808004 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.041934557675 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.37 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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