The advancement of Internet technology means people do not need to travel to foreign countries to understand how people in other places live. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
Although the development of internet technology allows people to see spectacular landscapes, wildlife and local citizens over the world via their devices’ screen, hence, numerous inhabitants consider that humankind does not need to travel abroad. From my perspective, I strongly disagree with this opinion.
When people visit a different country, it is a great opportunity for them to fall in line with natural habitats as well as communities at this state, which they can not experience when they interact through computers rather than face to face. Living in a foreign country allows them to get away from it all since it is a wonderful time to relax and reduce stress. Besides, they can learn a wide range of skills as communication by an international language, independence to name a few. In a modern world, those skills will enable them to survive in anywhere they want and become a real global citizen.
Even though some people argue that it consumes a large amount of money when a person travels abroad, I assume that it is not true. Firstly, if visitors have enough knowledge and capability, they may find a short-term job to cover their expenses at the same time. Moreover, with technological advances, they can surf information on some travelling websites to find accommodation at an affordable price or even they can ask to live along with native dwellers. More importantly, traveling brings merits for not only travelers but also local people since visitors allocate their budget for services such as food, transport, entertainment and so on. Thus, they contribute to create more job opportunities for residents.
In summary, for the aforementioned reasons, I totally believe that humankind should travel to foreign destinations because of economic and social advantages of this.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, hence, if, may, moreover, so, thus, well, in summary, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1510.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20689655172 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95405966255 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.658620689655 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.7787927261 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.833333333 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1666666667 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.08333333333 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135344971364 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0465299334332 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0409718833739 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.083201768615 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0339258691272 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.4 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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