Advantages and Disadvantages of consuming organic food
It is widely acknowledged that food plays a role as the chief factor affecting public health. Because of this, how to make a sagacious selection of daily food has been always a matter of great concern. It is typically believed that using organic products brings a lot of benefits to human health. While it may work to a certain extent, in this essay i would demonstrate that there are both advantages and disadvantages to this.
The key rationale in favor of the advocacy for organic food is that it is produced in a clean and safe way. During the procedure, there are only a few chemicals and fertilizers added and the products are subjected to rigorous quality check prior to its dispatch to food stalls, supermarkets and restaurants. In addition, the development of organic food is of critical importance to address the problem of employment and boost the national economy. For example, Meat Deli. a Vietnamese brand that sells organic meat, has strongly promoted job and income prospects for farmers since its introduction into the country market.
However, there are some drawbacks of this kind of food beside its benefits to consumers. First, although organic food is produced chemical-free and fertilizer-free, the procedure is considered time-consuming. Second, places where organic food is allowed for trade are primarily located in central cities, making it not always available for everyone. Third, quality is at the expense of price. In other words, the cost of high quality products may be too much for consumers having low or average income to cover.
In conclusion, i am of the opinion that there are both advantages and disadvantages to the consumption of organic food.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, may, second, so, third, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1423.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11870503597 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93465442151 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575539568345 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.8879226939 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.8666666667 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5333333333 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.376873081831 0.244688304435 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107406173627 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100515238395 0.0667982634062 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.250534209999 0.151304729494 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109426779607 0.056905535591 192% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.