Advantages and disadvantges of watching TV on children.
Everything is two sides like two sides of a coin, and so is the tv. watch tv has advantages.
First, it expands our knowledge. The information on tv is diverse, allowing viewers to update all aspects of life such as politics, socio-economic news, science, etc.
Second, the tv serves us as a means of relaxation. Movies, plays, tv shows are available all day. we can enjoy these programs at home whenever we want.
Third, it is a good friend to help us kill time. whenever we feel bored or do not know what to do. Simply turn on your tv and you will definitely feel OK soon. On the other hand, watching tv also has some disadvantages. bad content such as violent films, on-screen sex and other sensitive topics can be dangerous to children. In addition, watching tv too often or often also causes us to spend a lot of time and adversely affect our health, especially our eyes.
Finally, we also have to pay extra to consume electricity. In short, watching tv, can be good or bad, depending on how we use the tv to serve our lives
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 99, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
... plays, tv shows are available all day. we can enjoy these programs at home whenev...
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Line 7, column 50, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Whenever
... is a good friend to help us kill time. whenever we feel bored or do not know what to do...
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Line 7, column 221, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Bad
...atching tv also has some disadvantages. bad content such as violent films, on-scree...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, if, second, so, third, in addition, in short, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 41.998997996 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 855.0 1615.20841683 53% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 189.0 315.596192385 60% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.52380952381 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 4.20363070211 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65900259206 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.656084656085 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 257.4 506.74238477 51% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.5838405758 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 57.0 106.682146367 53% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.6 20.7667163134 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.26666666667 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248568598815 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0889617878846 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.096392888677 0.0667982634062 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134705500905 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0522785894569 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.2 13.0946893788 47% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 50.2224549098 152% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 11.3001002004 50% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.05 12.4159519038 65% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 78.4519038076 50% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 9.78957915832 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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