The advent of information technology has provided us with computers, and today, computerization is synonymous with development. How have computers changed our lives? Are we facing any problems due to them?
There is a drastic change in each and every sector due to rapid advancement in computer technology. Therefore, it makes our life easier, faster and convenient. Also a lot of upgrade in technology day by day. However, there are some impacts on mankind, it can not be overlooked. My inclinations are discussing further in ensuing paragraph.
To start with, what are the changes in our lives? Firstly,computers have much reduced manual works and depend on paperwork, which is save a lot of papers and thus contributed to the environment. Secondly,computer with Internet facility become more prevalent everywhere. Though it, we can do numerous works. An online shopping site like ebay is not only giving shopping option but also is providing people for a home-based business. Moreover, most of the service sectors have been computerized such as banking,library, railway etc. making the work fastest, easiest and comfortable for people. Apart from this,people can simply search or book any services with the help of computer. Needless to say that globalization has become possible just due to the invention of computers.
On the contrary, there are major effect on people and country's economy. Due to high usage of computers, computer workers should have experienced eyesight and obesity. Add on to this,computer technology is updating day by day and employees should also upgrade themselves by attending training or work for extra hours. So they feel tiredness and frustrate. Furthermore, computer technology is reduced manual work and do it automatically through programming machines. That's why it has increased unemployment and effect on country's economy.
In conclusion, computers have made our lives easier, but we need to be careful on our increasing dependence on computers otherwise the time would not be far when this intelligent machine would control us.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, apart from, in conclusion, such as, on the contrary, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1582.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39931740614 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1749604217 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641638225256 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.4658250033 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.3333333333 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.9523809524 20.7667163134 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.28571428571 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 3.4128256513 352% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264821862586 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0634952178057 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0657776980557 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142504228424 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.054920434464 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.82 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.45 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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