Advertisement has a negative influence on children behaviour. What are the main effects?

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...ondition and knowledge. Moreover, all TV media is controlled in some way by the g...
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Suggestion: , the
...ook attractive or interesting. To sum up,the government should restrict some limits ...
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Suggestion:
...ect on their bright and shining future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, look, moreover, so, such as, to sum up, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 41.998997996 40% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1024.0 1615.20841683 63% => OK
No of words: 178.0 315.596192385 56% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.75280898876 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 4.20363070211 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.29548857054 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 176.041082164 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.674157303371 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 308.7 506.74238477 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.8125672194 49.4020404114 46% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 93.0909090909 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1818181818 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.36363636364 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239206766829 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.094403656315 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0787768596052 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.239206766829 0.151304729494 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.77 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.