The bar graph below shows the amount of carbon emissions in different countries during three different years.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

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The bar graph below shows the amount of carbon emissions in different countries during three different years.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

The bar graph reveals the number of carbon emissions in various counties during three different years.

Overall, the amount of carbon emissions acclerated increadibly into thousand metric tonnes, as opposed, the level of China increased slightly over the periods.

It can be seen from the bar graph that the extent of USA and China expanded remarkably in 2005.Furthermore,the discharges of 1975 constituted multiply in different countries. In other words, virtually 1990 of carbon emissions diminished substantially into a low metric tonnes. Except for United Kingdom and Canada remain unchanged during three different years.The only Canada and United Kingdom producer on the list, the USA accounted double for just over 16 thousand metric tonnes.

In contrast, the rate of carbon emissions remain stable in Germany between 1975 and 1990, apart from India reduced enormously in 1975 at 15 thousand metric tonnes.The emissions of United Kingdom and Canada lessened considerably throughout the period.

To conclude, the amount of carbon discharges in different countries expanded gradually and depleted numerously during three different years.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, apart from, except for, in contrast, in other words

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 13.1623246493 8% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 2.0 24.0651302605 8% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 980.0 1615.20841683 61% => OK
No of words: 170.0 315.596192385 54% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.76470588235 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 4.20363070211 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91657950109 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 176.041082164 55% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564705882353 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 288.9 506.74238477 57% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 9.0 2.52805611222 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.0106111189 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.0 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2857142857 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.71428571429 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272786574595 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.156216098654 0.084324248473 185% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.124476635464 0.0667982634062 186% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197058831302 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.129843367949 0.056905535591 228% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.8 13.0946893788 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.42 12.4159519038 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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