Advertisements are becoming more and more common in everyday life. Is it a positive or negative development.
there is an increase in commercials in recent years. i completely believe that this trend brings out both advantages and negative influences.
it is evident that there are numerous benefits from the rise of commercials. firstly, advertising generates a variety of opportunities. for instance, it provides occupations to artists, designers, and copy-writers could have the chance to lead their creativities on logos, billboards, and contents. secondly, advertisements play a vital role to the progress of business. by watching commercials, the target customers could reach timely and purchase for their newest products. in comparison, buyers are by far the most beneficial individuals who have more choices due to collecting features of goods in advertisements. consequently, they will acquire appropriate items without spending much time on researching.
however, if advertisements helped on the business's budget, it will impact significantly to consumers. there is no doubt that the cost of good comprises the expense of advertisements. thus, buyers must pay a higher price than origin. moreover, the competitions of broadcasting between corporations will push the price of similar products over and over and sufferers are customers. secondly, the popularity of advertisements also causes irritating to audiences who are interrupted by commercial breaks when watching TV or internet programs. for examples, there are average six seconds of commercial break per one minute of clips on YouTube, it annoys considerably to audiences have few times after work to watching entertainments.
in conclusion, based on the above explanations, the growth of advertisements obtain both benefits and back draws.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1450.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.75396825397 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.44552320171 2.80592935109 123% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.662698412698 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.3868940608 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.625 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.75 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5625 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0859511615856 0.244688304435 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0247683621521 0.084324248473 29% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0297045585724 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0470069064468 0.151304729494 31% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0149665631726 0.056905535591 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.33 50.2224549098 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.77 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.15 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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