Advertising is gaining in popularity. Is it a positive or negative development.
In this fast-changing world, advertising plays is an important roles for business activities among many companies. There is no room for doubt that it is increasingly prevalent over time. Although it is brings some benefits, it is still a negative development.
On the one hand, advertising brings an enormous amount of money in their company as well as promotion in their markets. Thanks to advertisements, businesses can reach more costumers, so they can sell more products . In recent years, technology have been involved in many fields with connecting smart devices such as smartphone was be set up Facebook, Google, YouTube,…. Technological company promote advertisements on the online websites. A number of part time jobs or online jobs could creat on the social internet. Furthermore, it is creat a market with amount of variety goods which people can ask for any choice. Obvious advantage is that advertising may be suitable for providing messages about product and service in order to reach potential customers. Thereby, contributing to standard of individual living and favorable environments.
On the other hand, the business and technological companies in over the world exaggerate continuously their products for commercial purposes , even fake information or erotic images was post up into the news, online wedsites… Thus, a lot of costumers could be captivated by negative advertisements. As a result, the children who from three years old to ten years old tend to ignore parent’s useful advice. Therefore, they can become a victim and buy expensive items. Not only children, even everyone spend money on unnecessary items that make their to waste money. Finally, the companies with a strategical advertisement are always reach their purposes. By contrast, people in over the world shoulder the damage of this trends.
In conclusion, based on the advertising purposes, I personally believe that the both benefit or drawback always effect on development of advertisements.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: role
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Suggestion: .
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
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Suggestion: , …
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Suggestion: reached
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, furthermore, may, so, still, therefore, thus, well, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1695.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.46774193548 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19346596225 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635483870968 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 531.0 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 53.9629502529 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.1666666667 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2222222222 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.104991261222 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0341576625005 0.084324248473 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0478777498569 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0723079990851 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0335201490269 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.15 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.