Advertisements are becoming more more common in everyday life. Is it a positive or negative development
It is undeniable that commercial has become a familiar part of the society and one can unintentionally catch an advert whether they like it or not. From my perspective, this significantly widespread has both the benefits as well as drawbacks
On the one hand, there is a variety of advantages that advertising can bring to customers. First and foremost, it provides consumers with useful information about their expected commodities. An illustration of this is that people can make an informed decision about their ideal regular essentials or household appliances without any difficulty thanks to the television commercials. Another benefit of advertisement that worth pointing out is due to the fact that commercial can be a good means of entertainment. Several advertisements, especially the video advertising ones, are truly creative and unexpected, which can fill the audience with the cheering laughter and able the brand image to linger in their mind for quite a long time after. Adverts originated from Thailand can be a suitable case in points
Nevertheless, the adverse effects of the advert should not be underestimated. First and foremost, it may mislead the customer to purchase things that not necessary. There seem to be shreds of evidence that advertising has a great influence on consumer choice when going shopping. By the way of illustration, several digital gadgets' commercial has made the youngster long for the cutting edge version of their technological products, although their current one still functions perfectly. In the second place, since the organizations have to spend a huge amount of money on advertising, it may result in the entailed increasing of their product. The digital adverts, for instance, has made up roughly half the company budget of numerous enterprises as the marketing and advertising campaign may cost them approximately millions of dollar
In conclusion, from all the pre-mention thesis, advertising can be a good means of giving information about the product to the potential customer as well as being a source of entertainment. However, puffery using in the adverts may encourage the customer to buy unnecessary commodities and cost the organizations a great deal of money, which associated with the rise in the price of the product
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Suggestion: and
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, nevertheless, second, so, still, well, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, by the way, in the second place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1926.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 362.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32044198895 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20418174006 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566298342541 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 600.3 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.2024023921 49.4020404114 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.153846154 106.682146367 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.8461538462 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4615384615 7.06120827912 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0485526801444 0.244688304435 20% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0178576778675 0.084324248473 21% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0196350567988 0.0667982634062 29% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0298101852638 0.151304729494 20% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0062330708225 0.056905535591 11% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.56 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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