Advertising is all around us; it is an unavoidable part of everyone’s life. Some people say that advertising is a positive part of our lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is undoubtedly true that advertisement has been rising on an unprecedented scale and many people these days believed that it can have several advantages to humanity. From my perspective, both the negative and positive sides of advertising should be mentioned
On the one hand, there is a variety of benefits the advertisement brings. In the first place, promotion can be a good means of accelerating economic development. Advertising has played an important role in drawing more attention from potential customers. This is shown by an increasing number of enterprise spending a large budget on publicity. Furthermore, there is numerous kind of commodities that consumer needs to be fully informed before purchase. Insurance, which is an extraordinarily complicated product, can be a suitable case in point. Besides the economic value, advertisement allegedly considered as one of the art forms. There appear to be shreds of evidence that promotion can be thought-provoking and educational. It seems to be true that moralistic messages about affection, friendship or family core value are well received by the audience
Nevertheless, the negative impacts of advertising should not be underestimated. First and foremost, it is detrimental to mental health. There is numerous advertisement reportedly targeted the youngsters for marketing. Consequently, there is a remarkable quantity of children addicting to watch advertising. The second drawback is that publicity may lead to a materialistic lifestyle. Various organizations are extravagant promotions about their products and have the tendency to tempt people into making unnecessary purchases. Last but not least, excessive advertising may be considered as an unwelcome intrusion rather than useful information. Advertising through mass media such as social network or electronic mail can be pretty annoying if it appeared frequently
To sum up, adverting can be a medium for boosting the economy or sending optimistic messages, but it also can be harmful to psychological health, become an unwelcome intrusion or even lead to a consumerism society
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...retty annoying if it appeared frequently To sum up, adverting can be a medium for...
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Suggestion:
...on or even lead to a consumerism society
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, first, furthermore, if, may, nevertheless, second, so, well, kind of, such as, to sum up, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1797.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.65094339623 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.43669834786 2.80592935109 122% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61320754717 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 581.4 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.5628719104 49.4020404114 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.705882353 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7058823529 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.35294117647 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127812854536 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0430116097479 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0410426629971 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0864555216841 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0449068607955 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.49 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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