Advertisements of toys and fast foods are obstacles to children's physical and mental health development and at the same same time , causes loss of time and money of parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
Although advertisements are indispensable in this epoch; however, they might be perilous in certain cases. Some folks have perspectives that while the publicity of toys and junk foods is a hindrance to the structural and cognitive growth of children, at the same time it causes loss of precious time and money of guardians. I totally agree with the above notion and this essay will eventually cover that it is disadvantageous to both young and the family members.
Primarily, Tv ads about certain playing items and fast foods have a negative impact on juvenile's all-round development. This is because if they consume junk foods and play sedentary games; physical and mental growth will adversely be affected. For instance, research shows that many children in the UK have suffered from have packed foods and not playing physical games. So such games might affect children development.
Secondly, income and time of progenitor's loss if such advertisements are broadcasted. What I mean by the above statement is that they have to spend lots of money on buying such items for their young ones. Also, when they get the disease and certain abnormality, they have to spend their salary on doctors and at the same moment, their valuable time might be a loss. For instance, my uncle's child got sick as he consumed junk food on a daily basis due to which he was administered to the hospital for one month. Hence such ads also affect family members.
To recapitulate, promotion about toys and packed food incurred a negative impact. Not only they affect juvenile's physical and mental development, but guardians also have to suffer from this. Personally, I believe rather than adopting such items, school children should be encouraged to play with their friends and eat homemade foods.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 512, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...nistered to the hospital for one month. Hence such ads also affect family members. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, while, for instance, i mean
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1496.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08843537415 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74901485937 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557823129252 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.0457951392 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.7333333333 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226564261787 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0737069978728 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.07777618212 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141181800238 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0627131659852 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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