Advertising encourages consumer sir to buy in quantity rather than promoting quality to what extent do you agree or disagree.
Advertising is a key part of modern world. Noy only adds encourages people to buy in quantity but also promoting their quality. It is a form of Modern Art. I disagree to the presented statement. I put my opinion and ideas in the following paragraph.
Elementary, advertising is more utility into the Global world and it is very hard to survivr into the globalisation without advertising. Some different companies represented their items into the national and domestic market. Therefore, people can get fully information bout that products by advertising. Following this, it can be creates a lot of job and without advertising we would have less choice. In the present days, people can be watch some adds on television, mobile phones, radio, newspapers and so on. If people do not buy some items, companies will obtain big losses.
On the other hand, adds encourages consumers to purchase some things in bulk. Many times company sell their products on big discount. I believe first approach of adds to catch the attention of the teenagers which they put the pressure on their parents for buy items. Time and again, people can be easily know about products that we items mostly sell, which brand is the best and so on by advertising.
In final words, my opinion on par with that I believe both are important for selling products. As it is seen that people prefer for shopping those goods which provide some gifts rather than the goods of good quality.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 338, Rule ID: A_LOT_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun job seems to be countable; consider using: 'a lot of jobs'.
Suggestion: a lot of jobs
...sing. Following this, it can be creates a lot of job and without advertising we would have ...
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Line 2, column 374, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tes a lot of job and without advertising we would have less choice. In the presen...
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Line 3, column 331, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...an be easily know about products that we items mostly sell, which brand is the be...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, therefore, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1205.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 248.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85887096774 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66565807268 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592741935484 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 373.5 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.5059773627 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.8823529412 106.682146367 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5882352941 20.7667163134 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.17647058824 7.06120827912 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121918468754 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0387295728028 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0484239952333 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0772793244012 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0488850098924 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 13.0946893788 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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