In advertising nowadays, businesses usually highlight and emphasise that their products are new in some way. Why do businesses practice this? Do you think this development is a positive practice or a negative one?
It is true that nowadays companies try to present their products in the most unique way. That means that things are advertised to show the new features. In my own opinion, the disadvantages of this development considerably far outweigh its benefits and I think that it is mostly a negative aspect. In this essay, I am going to examine this question.
Business managers believe that if they highlight a number of original functions, the product will look unique against the others. Sales will grow up very quickly and it would provide an opportunity to earn more money. A particularly good illustration here is Apple. All brand iPhones are in fact similar to other smartphones by Samsung or Oppo. However, a clever presentation in the way of emphasise of the new key features helps to make the iPhone the most popular phone in the world.
As a customer, I would argue that this type of advertising does not help us to choose the right products for ourselves. This is because we begin to focus on the new aspects that were highlighted by managers. That is why we forget about the functions we particularly need in these things. For instance, statistically, most of the people buy a phone due to its camera. But in fact, this function of the phone is not common for everyone except professionals, this opinion is given to us.
In conclusion, it seems to me that this approach to sales of things can bring lots of money, but it is an absolutely negative trend due to the fact that it harms ordinary individuals.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'unique'.
Suggestion: unique
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, so, for instance, i think, in conclusion, in fact, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1262.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76226415094 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82023406566 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603773584906 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 395.1 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.8958895633 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.1333333333 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6666666667 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245670667601 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0715617449059 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0513551212554 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133324975001 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0686061307804 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.03 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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