Advertising that targets children should be banned from our televisions. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, as human life in the world which is overwhelmingly bombarded by various kind of advertisements, including tv channel program as media. many children are becoming victims by this commercial activity. I, therefore, agree that air broadcasting of advertising should be prohibited for those are underage.
In one hand, allowing children to watch long-duration ads is more likely to create consumerism mindset. this condition might undermine their creative thinking and decline productivity. As commercial ads tend to persuade customers to purchase desirable items even unnecessary, it would be addicted to continue to buy many products. As a result, their innovative idea would be stagnated and, moreover, a significant reduction of human outcome would be inevitable. For instance, In most of developing countries such as Indonesia, a vast majority of its adolescents, are gullible audience, fashion victims due to a massive advertisement by corporation. Thus, the restriction on electronic advertising should be applicated for the sake of children's future.
On the other hand, they are able to put more focus on their subject matter. In fact, Pupil's after school activity is dominated by watching tv show which contains commercial break; accordingly, a time schedule for studying is overshadowed by wasting pointless activity. If the more time are allocated on the learning process, the higher academic achievement would be reached easily, resulting competitive and qualified human resource. To illustrate this condition, Japan as one of the leading nation in science and technology, has proved, that with strict discipline both at school and home can create intelligence students because after accomplishing school's program they will do their fruitful activities such as finishing homework, conducting research, and doing unpaid community service. Hence, I consider that making television forbid for the youngster to be watched is crucial in term of early development.
In conclusion, personally, owing to its negative impact for teenager habit, I reassure that prohibition on advertising using electronic broadcaster should be taken in order to save their adulthood.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, hence, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, kind of, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1855.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.69018404908 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20589718055 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.644171779141 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 585.9 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.0978997942 49.4020404114 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.666666667 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7333333333 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.4 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150934190101 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0527653884747 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0580333459534 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0987009449662 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.03266577273 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.72 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.64 8.58950901804 124% => OK
difficult_words: 123.0 78.4519038076 157% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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