Age discrimination occurs when a decision is made on the basis of a person’s age. In the workplace, these are most often decisions about being employed in the first place, winning promotions or being unfairly dismissed. Should discrimination against older workers be made illegal?
Age bar in different hierarchy is common these days in the workplace. Some offices and workplaces are very keen to analyze the age factor while giving promotions and other facilities to the employees. Although it is a common trend of retiring in certain age older workers should not be biased in the name of age discriminations.
Old members are not old only they are the source of information and they are filled with experience. Companies these days seems seeking profit only but lacking the morality. In the name of recruiting energetic manpower they are giving retirement to their old workers. I stand with the point that firms should take their knowledge and experience in a systematic way and those tips should be handover to the juniors. On the other side, the newly recruited members lack exposure; in order to balance the both old members should be utilized.
Secondly, Youngers are not being given adequate opportunities because of the availability of the older, experienced members. Recent workers are filled with sufficient knowledge and skills the only thing they seek is the better place to flourish. In some organizations, they are treated as immature but they are the future pillar.so they are the means of change.It is certain that fix aged people are retired ones and it is a legal process as well, so i believe it shouldnot be illegal in any way.
To conclude, fixed age bar is needed but with the dignified retirement should be there. The aforementioned credentials should be implemented to balance both.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, second, secondly, so, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1283.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03137254902 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83102490941 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541176470588 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.7996666741 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.6923076923 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6153846154 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.23076923077 7.06120827912 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182942500044 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0723947553844 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0524643851886 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129416869183 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0574610284505 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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