since the industrial revolution, discrimination in the decision of managers has happened on the basis of person's age. In the workplace, it is illegal that in the first step, to evict older workers in critical situations, even if managers forced to evict their workers. For the purpose of this essay, I will analyze some negatives of this unfairly act.
To begin whit, there are various reasons to agree that unfairly decisions are harmful to the society and even in the workplace. At first, the older workers in a factory are married and at least they have a wife and children. If they lose their job they will not afford to fulfill their family. they maybe do foolish actions. For example, the aging and lost job people can not find a job easily and often do bad behavior such as theft or suicide.
In addition, Although, the older workers are not able to work as a young, they are very beneficial. they are experienced and familiar with different aspects of their career. they could help their company until they are alive. For instance, a recent research conducted by Tehran University researchers in 2015 has shown that a significant number of well-known companies employ the experienced aging workers again as an advisor, after retiring from their job.
In conclusion, while there are several compelling arguments about discrimination decisions on aging workers, I profoundly believe that whatever managers have to strict actions, they should be fair against older workers which are beneficial for the company.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, so, well, while, at least, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1240.0 1207.87684729 103% => OK
No of words: 246.0 242.827586207 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0406504065 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70275073291 2.71678728327 99% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 139.433497537 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605691056911 0.580463131201 104% => OK
syllable_count: 390.6 379.143842365 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.6157635468 173% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 1.71428571429 292% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.4297001084 50.4703680194 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.3846153846 104.977214359 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9230769231 20.9669160288 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.07692307692 7.25397266985 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182762901848 0.242375264174 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0612375087262 0.0925447433944 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0837347453236 0.071462118173 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123272533153 0.151781067708 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0704842052343 0.0609392437508 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 12.6369458128 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.1260098522 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 11.5310837438 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.32886699507 105% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 55.0591133005 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 68.0 Out of 90
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