The age at which children are allowed to work for money varies from country to country. While some people believe it is wrong, other regard it as a valuable opportunity to gain experience of the work environment.
Discuss the arguments for and against children participating in paid work.
The average age of children who start working for living is usually different in various countries. In developed nations youngsters and teenagers begin earning as a part-time jobs besides their studies. they consider it as a learning experience to be independent. In developing nations age group of 10-20 yrs join as an earning member of family due to some obvious reason but not by choice. these children leave their studies to start working.
paid working is helpful to younger age group only if it is considered as an experience and not compulsion. In Western countries it is a common trend to do small jobs at restaurants, theatres, petrol pumps for children in their vacations and holidays. In fact Schools and colleges keep campaigns to promote independent living among youngsters. In poor and underdeveloped nations this scenario is completely opposite. children are being forced to start earning with sacrifice of their education and healthy living. they engage in household working jobs, sometimes even professional beggars, shoe polishing, delivery services etcetera. Few child trafficking rackets had also been caught which has been done in purpose of to engage small kids in these jobs to make them earn for their boss. it is a punishable crime.
The idea of making children attend paid jobs in their free time is really fruitful in view of their learning instead of just a physical and mental exhaustion and compulsion, but sole purpose of making income from children's hard work is punishable in most of developed and developing countries.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, really, so, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1323.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81785990907 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.607142857143 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 394.2 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.2109517345 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.5 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.07142857143 7.06120827912 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171112630507 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0538428411724 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.051801546082 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115332180974 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0318729856742 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.87 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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