The aging population is good for business, the economy and society. Others disagree.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Once of the recent strong changing trends is the movement of old population, in which the elderly increase both in number of proportion to the total population, both an opportunity and a challenge for sustainable development for the economy, community and companies. in my point of view there will be more negatives than positives.
on one hand, due to the age factor, it is not possible for elderly people to work continuously without taking a break after every one or two hours, which in turn, affects the productivity levels forcing the organisation to hire more people to fill the void. Furthermore, though they have years of experience, it is usually out of date and is of little use to the current generation who need to learn how to employ modern technologies. Moreover, a plenty of old people would pose a burden to families as parents would have to take care of older family members, and no doubt aged citizens tend to be meddlesome and stubborn, causing frequent conflicts probably.
on the positive side, as most people in modern times are busy with tasks in the workplace, elderly members like grandparents can do the babysitting, relieving parents’ worries of their children lacking in moral support or leisure activities. In addition, the elderly often have poor health, so they often get sick, the trend of aging is growing, the demand for health care services is increasing and that is a premise for the state. Increasingly developing hospitals as well as health care services, which bring in huge revenue
In conclusion, it is often believed that the ageing population is practically good for business, the economy and society, I am more convinced that this is an urgent problem because it affects people’s lives in the future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, moreover, so, well, in addition, in conclusion, no doubt, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1459.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9795221843 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84737381693 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62457337884 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 20.2975951904 177% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.5435837445 49.4020404114 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 182.375 106.682146367 171% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.625 20.7667163134 176% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.125 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145900052081 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0559902721514 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0401075445859 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0939697465269 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0448313751662 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.3 13.0946893788 155% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.94 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 11.3001002004 153% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.2 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.95 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 21.0 9.78957915832 215% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.1190380762 162% => OK
text_standard: 21.0 10.7795591182 195% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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