In the last decades, certain human activities have generated detrimental influences markedly on a delicately balanced ecosystem in the worldwide. While some people argue that this type of widespread destructions of wild lives and plants may not be halted, i believe there are particular strategies which can produce a radical change. This essay will first discuss the two common factors that remain chiefly responsible for the extermination and secondly the potential interventions that ought to be made by government and followed by citizens closely with relevant examples.
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Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 8.0 out of 9
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 13 15
No. of Words: 348 350
No. of Characters: 1950 1500
No. of Different Words: 238 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.319 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.603 4.6
Word Length SD: 3.057 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 157 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 124 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 93 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 70 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 26.769 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 10.906 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.692 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.292 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.529 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.011 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 257, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ild lives and plants may not be halted, i believe there are particular strategies...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1997.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 348.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.73850574713 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12411567617 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 238.0 176.041082164 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.683908045977 0.561755894193 122% => OK
syllable_count: 651.6 506.74238477 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 75.5539698948 49.4020404114 153% => OK
Chars per sentence: 153.615384615 106.682146367 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.7692307692 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.76923076923 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214825471917 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0662769112884 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0639191726251 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116576846621 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0633393612813 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.0 13.0946893788 145% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 19.71 50.2224549098 39% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.0 11.3001002004 150% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.31 12.4159519038 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.32 8.58950901804 132% => OK
difficult_words: 141.0 78.4519038076 180% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.78957915832 163% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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