Air traffic is increasingly leading to more noise, pollution and airport construction. One reason for this is the growth in low-cost passenger flights, often to holiday destinations.
Some people say that governments should try to reduce air traffic by taxing it more heavily.
Do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, number of people who prefer airline to travel for bussiness and holiday purposes is dramatically rising. Therefore, this increase brings about several problems such as air and noise pollution and crowded air traffic. Although some problems occur, people who have more less salary can travel using airline more fastly and comfortly thanks to cheaper airline tickets. so, i argue that the government shouldn’t increase taxes of airline by rejecting given opinion.
Primarly, increasing taxes does not minimize air pollution and air traffic congestion as number of people who have to use airline for travelling to far away places have always been. Furthermore, air and noise pollution and the other problems caused by airplanes are not relevant whether how many people use it, it is relevant technical issues, which are whether lesser clean and silent motors have been. so that, perhaps we would have had more fresh air and all people would have cheaply used airline for rapid travelling if airplane technology had produced planes which have low carbon emission and more muted engines.
Secondly, developing technologies of cities bring along rising of requirements of transportation options among distant countries. Thus, it is naturally that cities have been requiring new airport constructions for the past 20 years. On the other hand, to rise the taxes causes that cities can not develop as people couldn’t buy tickets of airplane and they couldn’t travel fastly and easily between distant places for bussiness or another reason.
In conclusion, problems mentioned continue increasing even if governments has increased the taxes of airline if aircraft manufacturers doesn’t produce technological developed engines which are more clean and more convenient.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1535.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.62271062271 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81799516577 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59706959707 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.7780781749 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.545454545 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8181818182 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.81818181818 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222194595085 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0922280821022 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0667454259097 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132202417156 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0617961769596 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.61 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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