All children should learn to speak a foreign language as soon as they start school. how far do you agree with this proposal? How important is it for a child to learn a foreign language?
One of the wide-spread points of view on the kids’ educational process is that children ought to study another language besides their mother tongue starting at the primary school program. I strongly agree with this statement and reckon that learning a foreign language might be considered for the future of the young generation.
Perhaps the major factor for obtaining knowledge OF new language as early as possible in life is in simplicity this process HAS GOT for children comparING with adults. Nobody can deny the fact that to learn and remember new alienATED words was easier in childhood. Moreover, this feature in speed of training of the kids is proved by scientists. Secondly, the time of practice has significant meaning for the excellent results in utilizing foreign LANGUAGE vocabulary and grammar. It is a great difference between if a person starts speaking unfamiliar language from 5 years old or from 30, WHILST making mistakes. The elders may refuse from studying according TO their fear OF HAVING BEEN FELT in the pupil's position again. Furthermore, bilingualism tends to be useful in a job HUNTING due to opportunity for a candidate to fulfill more obligations, and in that way beING more attractive for the employers. In plenty of world countries knowing of English is preferable for applying TO government-related work.
Admittedly, IT might be fair to focus on fundamental proficiency similar to natural sciences, nevertheless, along with these practical subjects, learning languages appears to improve the brain as a student should understand alternative method of thinking.
It is logical to conclude that to be bilingual FOR children HAS GOT a range of undeniable advantages, so it is profitable for the kids to start this action sooN.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, furthermore, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, second, secondly, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1497.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27112676056 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0226509665 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630281690141 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.9813053837 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.75 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6666666667 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.297685517633 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0961194385358 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0730749167063 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174474038878 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0569651508194 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.73 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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