All children should learn to speak a foreign language as soon as they start school. How far do you agree with this proposal? How important is it for a child to learn a foreign language?
Some people believed that it is important for a children to learn a foreign language as soon as they begin to learn art school. Personally, I entirely disagree with this statement for some reasons that I will elaborate more below.
Perhaps, one major reason we should reconsider from this would be the problem with such children's interest in learning foreign language. By lack of motivation to learn, they are unable to be thoroughly enjoyable in the person, meaning that the essential learning cannot be gained by them, causing learning process inefficient. Additionally, not all children have the interest to learn a foreign language. Children are born with different talent, skill and interest. It is not a good idea forcing them. Moreover, foreign languages are generally poorly taught to children as they have no idea why they should learn the language. For example, the British do not need to learn another language because they have no interest in learning other culture's language.
In conclusion, it seems to me that the lack of motivation is a real drawback. Learning another subject that is more interesting and compatible with children would seem to be better as soon as they start school.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 47, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a child' or simply 'children'?
Suggestion: a child; children
...eople believed that it is important for a children to learn a foreign language as soon as ...
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Line 1, column 117, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to art', 'to be'
Suggestion: to art; to be
...language as soon as they begin to learn art school. Personally, I entirely disagree...
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Line 3, column 181, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...e with children would seem to be better as soon as they start school.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1005.0 1615.20841683 62% => OK
No of words: 198.0 315.596192385 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07575757576 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7139639734 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 176.041082164 61% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545454545455 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 303.3 506.74238477 60% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.0874898014 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.3636363636 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.417385655827 0.244688304435 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.165964822407 0.084324248473 197% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.120491057317 0.0667982634062 180% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.281619491206 0.151304729494 186% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0847760552607 0.056905535591 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 78.4519038076 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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