OF all the Fortune 500 companies, only 4% have female CEOs. The government should change the policy so that women make up an equal 50% of executed business positions.
Choose whether you agree or disagree with this statement and discuss why you chose that position. Support your point of view with details from your own experiences, observations or reading.
The studying of the Fortune 500 companies has shown, that since the beginning of the 21st century,
the number of female COEs has only increased up to 4% of the total number. Some people believe that governments should legislate new laws which oblige companies to hire more women at the positions of executed business positions, and the percentage must equal to 50%, while others argue that this issue relates to the companies polices, and governments do not have the right to force companies to change their polices. This essay will discuss the reasons why the governments should regulate new laws which aim increasing numbers of women at the CEO positions.
The governments should oblige companies to hire more women at the CEOs positions because women own equal rights to men. These days women have shown their abilities to occupy leader positions, they compete men with their knowledge and their performance. Recent research, which was conducted in USA, has shown that 99% of women have achieved their tasks better than men. Therefore, governments have to impose a new law which oblige companies to hire more women at the CEOs positions.
On the other hand, some people argue that women are not suitable for higher positions at companies and consequently governments should not oblige companies to hire more women at executed business positions because their characters are not similar to men. Men are more tough at difficult situation rather than women. Recent research, which was conducted in Jordan, has shown that men decisions are more accurate than women decisions at difficult situations. These people are unaware of the fact that not all women are the same, and there women more tough than men. Thus, it seems clear that women have the right to work equally to men at the higher positions in the big companies.
In conclusion, this essay discussed why governments should force companies to hire more women at the executed business positions. In my opinion, I believe that women have proofed their capabilities of doing difficult tasks under difficult situations, and they have succeed, so government should oblige companies to change their policies.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 266, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'succeeded'.
Suggestion: succeeded
...der difficult situations, and they have succeed, so government should oblige companies ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, if, so, therefore, thus, while, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1819.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 353.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15297450425 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56555270572 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.42492917847 0.561755894193 76% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 561.6 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.2904637547 49.4020404114 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.928571429 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2142857143 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.64285714286 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225544301124 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102472706024 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0557761925382 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148498680269 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0661032120823 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 9.78957915832 174% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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